When I held my son for the first time
I realized what a great responsibility was mine
The miracle of parenthood is so wonderful
you feel the world around you become colorful.
I feel all the joy and pains through him
he makes my world around him spin.
I want only the very best for him
nothing painful or grim,
I think God made us into parents
so that we can share in his burden.
Now I tell my son to be careful
he says don’t worry mom I will do the needful.
When I see him my heart swells with pride
I find my feelings very hard to hide.
My son tells me I don’t have clue
Mom I will take care of you.
Oh how fleetingly time flies
I hope this feeling in me never dies...
GFK
GFK...
பதிலளிநீக்குYour poem is trully emotional.The wavelength in the relationship between son and mother is beautiful.Nothing is equivalent to that.
Mother love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible is the wordings I remember.
congrats
Chocks
Wonderful,GFK.
பதிலளிநீக்குYes.it's true .Having become parents,we get rid off all sort of tension,worries,sentiments etc...etc...,the moment we see our offsprings.All praise is to Almighty.
BHAI.
Nice kavithai, the transformation from Deepa's son to Neel's mom is the greatest feeling.
பதிலளிநீக்குkaraiyan.
wow D pakirisamy(sorry)GFK
பதிலளிநீக்குu r really a talented poet
beautiful lines apply to me as a father of 4.
keep it up,poss u could compile all ur poems into a book
peer
Nice!!
பதிலளிநீக்குall ur poems are so nice and seem to be spontaneous
பதிலளிநீக்குkeep it up - msk