Camels treading on the sands of time
fleeting by a scene at a time.
Thinking there is a lot of fun
dreaming dreams of times to come.
Waiting for the oasis to near
having almost nothing to fear.
I can almost hear the stream
only to realize it is a dream.
There is a mirage we all follow
only to find that those dreams were hollow.
We shall hope that we find our oasis soon
even if it is only for a noon.
GFK
This is the first time I am writing my poem,comments welcome
இந்த கருத்து ஆசிரியரால் அகற்றப்பட்டது.
பதிலளிநீக்குஇந்த கருத்து ஆசிரியரால் அகற்றப்பட்டது.
பதிலளிநீக்குWell done GFK..
பதிலளிநீக்குDeserts are normally compared with the pains of the life of suffering people.
But your lyric brings out hopes and optimism.
The content and format of the poem looks like from a creator who is writing for a long time.If this is really your first attempt it's MARVELOUS
Congrats and keep writing
My earlier comments are deleted as I mentioned MSK instead of GFK
Chocks
Nice kavithai.
பதிலளிநீக்குThis kavithai is a "oasis in the desert". There are so many kavignars in our batch, it is good to bring out the kavignars in all of us.
Karaiyan.
Kudos to you GFK,
பதிலளிநீக்குBHAI.